Lesson 7, #1, Who is the audience for your essay? What is the thesis of essay? Does it include the claim and 3 supporting reasons to make it a strong thesis?

The audience of my essay is for parents who are seeking for the best education for their children. My essay focuses on how homeschooling is an excellent choice for parents to explore. Home school is the best way to teach children to be prepared for their future with their parents’ help. The essay has three supporting reasons about why home school is a great choice. Home school students will learn to be mature and responsible in pursuing their academic interests and students tend to score higher on tests than public school students do. Many home school students also choose to go to college as well. Lastly, parents love the idea that their children are not exposed to the risks and dangers that they could face in public school. I believe that the three supporting claims help my thesis in being stronger in the paper.