Lesson 4, #2, Did you ask anyone else to make recommendations about your revising process? Why or why not?

Yes, I have asked my younger sister who is very skilled in English, my father, and some tutors at the writing center. Most of the time I will focus too hard and don’t realize that I got my point lost in the paper. I ask my younger sister to see if I’m on track smoothly and see if my point is good. My dad mostly helps me out with editing and explains to me where I made mistakes. Tutors at the writing center help me out with my thesis and help make my point to be clear in the paper. I learned about how to keep on having the paper focus on one subject so it will not lost the reader’s attention. I’ve started improving on my writing process because of everybody’s help.